Hey Robyn J. Kraft – learn how to write!

You see, Robyn, there are these cool new things called paragraphs, which you should probably learn how to use. Your article about the Rochester Twilight Criterium is severely lacking in them. Unless you are an award winning sports journalist like Mr. Matthews, you should stay away from the convenient question and answer format, because it really isn't too hard to string the facts in the press release together in the series of sentences that comprise the “paragraph”.

To the rest of you, please do not let Ms. Kraft's lackluster article deter you from attending the event, since it is a ton of fun. I would be attending myself if I wasn't going to be busy charring meat and drinking beer that night.